This is more or less Dr. Horrible: the IF. It’s an intentionally very short piece set in a single room, with a limited number of objects. There are a couple things to do, and I think most people will do them given a little experimentation.
Unlike The Dragon Will Tell Your Fortune Now, the point of the story is not that it is unwinnable. It can be won. But I will mention that it is also possible to put the game in an unwinnable state (which may not have been the author’s intention).
Evaluation:
Story: 3 (not bad, just short)
Voice: 6. SCIENCE! And world domination.
Play: 7
Polish: 8
Technical: 5
JNSQ: 0
Preliminary Score: 5.8