I’d assumed in my preview based on blurbs and cover art that this was a troll entry, but I’m not sure. I realize that isn’t a ringing endorsement. This Twine work consists of a few pages of open verse with sparse hyperlinks. Some of the language is coarse, but not most of it, and it doesn’t have that abusive tone towards that reader that most troll entries would.
What does it mean, though? No idea.
Story: 1 – Can’t discern one.
Voice: 1 – Variable; maybe intentionally so.
Play: 2 – No problems clicking around.
Polish: 6 – This short work seems well edited.
Technical: 3 – Simple hypertext.
Preliminary score: 2.6